Several people commented on tears coming to their eyes during the scenes at the concert. FYI, when writing those scenes, tears came to mine, too. Worse, I had to read them more than once, for editing purposes, which means the tears came more than once.
Several people asked about the song at the end. Did I have music or more lyrics? Sorry guys, it’s tough enough just putting sentences together. Making things rhyme is well beyond me. As for music, I have many fine talents, but that ain’t one of them. Curiously, as I rode around town on errands, I heard an old hit by the group Toto, whose first big hit was labelled ‘Hold the Line’. Totally different song.