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Chapters 21 & 22

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One of my readers pointed out several problems with the scenario I wrote in the bank, pointing out all sorts of problems with what the sheriff did, the deputies’ actions, lawyers, etc. Did I go a bit over the top? Sure! Most of what has happened to the Grim Reaper has been over the top. As one of my editors noted to me, the man’s a shit magnet! However, does crap like this happen? Yes! I found it a strange coincidence that when I was reading my emails after first publishing this story I was watching four Minneapolis cops get fired when one of them knelt on a suspect’s neck until he died and the other three watched and did nothing. I know it’s not the same thing, but it was eerie!