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When Water Balloons Changed Everything

Copyright© 2026 by Jackstoryteller

Chapter 10

Friday, June 18

I pushed through my morning exercises and a hard bike ride, but my mind kept circling the same worry: thirty sketches. Simple ones, yes—but thirty was still thirty.

At breakfast I finally asked, “Dad ... how big do these sketches have to be? I don’t want to draw them wrong.”

Dad set down his coffee. “Let’s call Jim.”

Jim answered immediately. After hearing Jack’s concern, he said, “Let me check with the print shop.” A minute later he was back.

“They can reduce anything to the right size. But remember — when they shrink a drawing, you lose detail. So, keep the sketches simple. As few lines as possible.”

Relief loosened my shoulders—until Jim added:

“Oh, and we’ll need them by Monday. Tuesday morning at the latest.”

I froze. “Jim ... there are over thirty sketches.”

“I know,” Jim said gently. “Just do as many as you can. Send whatever you finish with your mom each morning.”

I hung up with pressure tightening in my chest. Thirty sketches in three days.

I worked straight through the morning, but doubt kept creeping in. Were they too simple? Too rough? Too detailed?

Finally, I said, “Dad, can we go to Jim’s office? I need to know if I’m doing this right.”

Dad didn’t hesitate. “Let’s go.”

At Rubbermaid, Mom walked me to the art department. The designers pulled out their own renderings—clean, professional lines. I braced myself.

But one designer tapped Jack’s sketch and said, “These are better. Cleaner. More direct. Perfect for reduction.”

The knot in my stomach loosened.

I went home and worked steadily through the afternoon and evening, sketching one product after another. The panic faded into focus. I could do this.

Meanwhile, dad returned to the lawyer’s office — the revised contracts were ready to sign and mail.

Saturday, June 19

Saturday morning, I double‑checked everything: the prototype, my script, Mrs. Orland’s devotional record. I packed them into a cardboard box and took a breath.

This wasn’t just another errand. This was a moment.

Dad warned the boys in the car, “Best behavior today. This is important for your brother.”

They nodded solemnly.

At WAKN‑TV, Chad Dawson was waiting with his producer’s badge and an excited grin.

“Morning, Bigg family. Ready to make some television?”

We followed him into a small studio — tight, warm, humming with equipment. To me, it felt like stepping onto a real stage.

Chad positioned me behind a table, adjusted the lights, and gently moved my shoulders.

“Relax your hands. When you gesture, keep it small. The camera magnifies everything.”

I nodded, heart thumping.

We ran through the script once. Then again. Then again.

Chad coached him on timing, eye contact, how to tilt the clock for close‑ups. Dad watched from the corner, arms folded, pride written all over him. Mom whispered encouragement to the younger boys, who were mesmerized by the slides and switches in the control room.

Take after take, I grew more confident. My voice steadied. My gestures sharpened. My smile became natural.

Two hours later, Chad lowered the lights.

“That’s it. We’ve got it. Jack — you’re going to knock Ron Propeil flat.”

I exhaled, grinning. I hadn’t realized how much I would love this — the lights, the focus, the invisible audience. It felt right.

Dad clapped my shoulder. “You did good, son.”

I looked at the camera one more time, feeling a spark I couldn’t quite name.

Tomorrow, I’d meet Ron Propeil.

And I believed I was ready.

Dad decided on lunch at Luigi’s. It was packed, the air thick with garlic and baked cheese. A hostess led us to an oversized booth near the back.

I slid in beside my brothers, still buzzing from the studio.

Luigi was known for authentic Italian cooking. He didn’t serve pizza—calzones, yes, but no pizza. What caught dad’s eye was the “Family Dinner” on the menu: four generous platters for the whole table—an antipasto of cured meats, provolone, olives, and roasted peppers; baked rigatoni layered with tomato sauce, ricotta, and mozzarella; chicken cacciatore braised with peppers, onions, mushrooms, and tomatoes; and eggplant Parmigiana, crisp at the edges beneath bubbling sauce and cheese.

When the waitress arrived and took drink orders that was what dad ordered.

“That control room was crazy,” Frank said. “All those buttons. How do they know what to push?”

“And those big reels spinning “, David asked, “what do those do?”

I grinned. “That’s the tape system. They record everything from the camera on those reels. And the control room can switch between cameras if two are used, add sound, control lights ... everything.”

“It looked like a spaceship,” Frank whispered.

Mom laughed. “It did feel a little like NASA.”

The waitress dropped off bread. The boys tore into it.

“But Jack,” David asked, “why did it take so long?”

I shook my head. “That wasn’t a real commercial. Just a demo.”

His dad nodded. “A practice run.”

I continued, “A real commercial takes way longer. Editing alone can take four to nine hours. They cut mistakes, fix sound, add close‑ups. What we did today was raw footage.”

“So ... they’re gonna fix it?”

“Nope. This one goes straight to Mr. Propeil. He’ll make the real commercial.”

“That’s even cooler,” his brother whispered.

The family-style platters arrived, filling the table with the fragrance of garlic, tomatoes, roasted peppers, and baked cheese. The boys reenacted my lines with exaggerated gestures as they passed the dishes from hand to hand. The whole family laughed.

I felt the spark again — the one from the studio lights.

I finished the last sketches late that afternoon and spread them across my desk in three uneven rows.

Thirty drawings. I counted twice, then checked each one against the product list.

Some lines still looked rough to me, but I remembered what the designers had said: cleaner, more direct, perfect for reduction.

I stacked the pages carefully, slid them into a folder, and wrote Jim’s name across the front.

For the first time all day, I let myself breathe.

Sunday, June 20 — Father’s Day

I woke up early, did my exercises, and biked around the allotment. I didn’t coast. I didn’t rest. For the first time, I made it up the hill without walking.

The boys gave their dad handmade cards. Dad acted like each one was priceless. Lunch was burgers and beans. Mom lay out in the sun. I tried to read, but my mind kept drifting to the upcoming call.

Ron Propeil would call sometime after 3:30.

Rom stepped off the TWA 707, briefcase in hand. His mind kept circling the same thought:

A fourteen‑year‑old built a prototype, wrote a script, and filmed a demo?

He found a payphone, dropped in a dime, and dialed the Biggs’ number.

Jack’s dad answered. “Hello?”

“Mr. Biggs, this is Ron Propeil. I’ve just landed in Cleveland. I’ll be in Akron in about an hour and a half.”

Dad straightened. “We’ll be ready, sir.”

“I’m looking forward to seeing that demo your neighbor filmed,” Ron said. “And I want to meet your son properly.”

His dad smiled toward Jack. “He’ll be thrilled.”

“Good. Tell him not to be nervous.”

Rom hung up and headed for the rental counter.

The call came at 4:15.

Everything snapped into motion.

I called Chad. Chad called the station manager, Roger Moore. Roger said he’d be there in twenty minutes.

I dressed quickly. My suit sleeves were a little short. Pants too. I tugged them straight.

Dad appeared in the doorway. “Ready?”

I nodded.

Roger Moore met them in the lobby — tall, silver‑haired, crisp suit.

“So, you’re the young man causing all this excitement,” Roger asked?

“Yes, sir.”

“I watched the raw footage this morning. You’ve got presence. Most adults freeze under studio lights. You didn’t.”

I felt my ears warm. “Thank you.”

Roger led them to a small conference room. “We’ll screen the demo in here.”

Ron stepped in wearing a dark suit, carrying a slim briefcase. He shook hands all around.

He turned to Jack. “You are taller than I expected.”

I stood straight. “Yes, sir.”

Roger dimmed the lights and pressed play.

I appeared on screen — steady voice, clean gestures, devotional music in the background.

Ron watched without blinking.

When it ended, he nodded. “That is a very good start.”

The private dining room at the Sheraton‑Cleveland was quiet and paneled in dark wood.

Once the waiter left, Ron folded his hands.

“Let me start by saying this: I’m impressed. Not just with the product — but with you, Jack.”

I blushed. “Me?”

“You have a presence. People buy from people. And you have the kind of sincerity that sells.”

I felt warmth rise in my chest.

Ron leaned forward. “Most people think I’m in the commercial business. I’m not. Commercials are just the spark. What I do is build momentum.”

He tapped the table.

“I create demand so strong that stores have no choice but to carry the product.”

Dad nodded slowly. “So, your team pushes it into retail?”

Ron smiled. “Push? Keith, they’ll storm the gates.”

He turned to Jack. “And you — you’re the face of that wave.”

I swallowed hard.

I hesitated, then spoke. “Mr. Propiel ... I had another idea.”

Ron looked up, interested. “Alright, Jack. Let’s hear it.”

“Well, I said carefully, “what if we didn’t use just one voice for the devotionals? What if we got national and regional TV evangelists to record messages? People already trust them. And maybe they’d even talk about the clock on their programs. We could offer a new tape each month.”

His dad blinked. His mom’s eyebrows lifted.

Ron’s expression sharpened — not skeptical, but calculating. “Evangelists,” he repeated. “You mean the ones with regular airtime? Sunday morning broadcasts? Local church programs?”

 
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