When Water Balloons Changed Everything
Copyright© 2026 by Jackstoryteller
Chapter 8
Thursday, June 10
There was no wake-up call—only sunlight pushing through the hotel drapes, warm and insistent. I woke feeling surprisingly good. Dad had already slipped out, so the note on the dresser didn’t surprise me:
Downstairs. Coffee shop.
I cleaned up, threw on fresh clothes, and headed down. Dad and Sid were already at a corner table, both halfway through their first cups. Sid looked like he’d slept in his suit. Dad looked like he’d slept in his responsibilities.
Dad glanced up. “Our flight leaves at one. With L.A. traffic, a bigger airport, and the car return, we should check out and leave by ten-thirty.”
I nodded and reached for a menu.
Just then, a bellhop approached with a small envelope. Dad fished for change to tip him while I took the note.
It was addressed to me.
Please call me at this number ASAP. We have to talk about your ‘Control Room and Missions idea.’ — Mike Allen
My eyebrows shot up. I handed the note to Dad. He read it once and stood immediately.
“Let’s find a phone.”
We stepped into the lobby, where a row of payphones lined the wall. Dad handed me the receiver.
“Go ahead.”
I dialed.
“Mike Allen,” came the voice — rushed, breathless.
“Mike, this is Jack Biggs. How may I help you today?”
“Jack — you and your dad need to come in this morning. I showed your command room idea to our new project manager and he’s excited. How soon can you get here?”
I covered the receiver. “Dad ... they want us back.”
Dad took the phone. “Mike, Keith Biggs. Listen — we have to leave the hotel by ten to make a one‑o’clock flight. It’s seven‑thirty now. It’s an hour and a half to get to you, and another hour and a half from your place to the airport. There’s no way we can make it in person.”
He paused, listening.
“Yes, I saw the drawing he gave you. Yes, I think it’s a great concept. No, I wasn’t aware that Man from U.N.C.L.E. wasn’t your franchise. You’re coming out with a new figure and want an exclusive on the concept.”
Dad’s eyebrows rose.
“Mike, let me talk it over with my team and I’ll call you back. Thanks.”
He hung up.
They moved to a sofa in the lobby.
“Well,” Dad said, “you heard my side. What do you think?”
Sid spoke first. “This will work for all action figures. I don’t think we want to limit ourselves to just one.”
I nodded. “Maybe ... if they incentivize us enough, we could offer a six‑month delay before we show it to other companies. Mattel would have the exclusive for Toy Fair in February. Everyone else would be playing catch‑up.”
Dad smiled. “Yes. That’s the angle.”
Sid added, “Make the time period end right before they announce their new figure. If other companies hear about this and we haven’t offered it, they’ll steal it. But if we send a sell sheet, they have to negotiate with us.”
Dad nodded. “Let’s go back to the room. No need for the whole lobby to hear our strategy.”
Sid stood. “I’ll get a coffee service sent up. We won’t have time to come back down.”
“We didn’t eat. How about a couple of muffins?” I asked.
Upstairs, Dad and Jack straightened the room and waited.
“What do you think would incentivize you enough?” Dad asked.
I didn’t hesitate. “Same numbers as the car accessories — but with a small percentage on the figure itself. After all, this will drive up his numbers.”
Dad laughed. “That’s off‑the‑wall thinking ... and I like it.”
Sid arrived with the coffee service, some muffins and bagels. Dad picked up the phone.
“Mike, Keith. Here’s what we’re thinking. Six percent for the Mission Room concept, and we want two percent on the action figure in exchange for not presenting the idea to other companies until you’re ready to reveal your figure.”
A pause.
“Yes, I know that’s highway robbery. But you’re asking us to forgo a lot of money by not offering it elsewhere.”
Another pause.
“Yes, talk it over with Eldon. He can call me directly. Room 1147. We’ll expect your call.”
Dad hung up. “Fifteen minutes to half an hour. Let’s pack so we’re ready if this drags out.”
Sid went next door to pack. Dad and I gathered their things.
Sid had just returned when the phone rang.
Dad answered. “Hello ... good morning to you too.”
He listened, then frowned.
“Three percent and no percentage on the figure for an exclusive? No thanks. Mike said my numbers were highway robbery, but what you’re offering sounds more like loan‑shark numbers.”
He paused again.
“We’d settle for five percent on the concept.”
Another pause.
Dad chuckled. “Yeah, we’re both crooks.”
He listened again. “Four percent on the concept and a quarter percent on the figure?”
Jack grabbed a pad and scribbled:
4½% + 1% on figure — settle for ½% on figure
Dad read it, nodded, and repeated it into the phone.
A long pause.
Then Dad smiled.
“Alright, Eldon. Just so we’re clear: we get four‑and‑a‑half percent on the concept and half a percent on the figure in exchange for delaying presentation to other companies. You’ll notify us when you will announce your figure, and we’ll send offer sheets to the other companies so they can’t steal the concept.”
Another pause.
“Yes, I want assurances in the contract that we won’t get cut out of the other companies’ money.”
Dad nodded. “Good. I look forward to seeing the contracts. Good day.”
He hung up.
I exhaled. Sid grinned. Dad leaned back in his chair.
“Well, gentlemen,” he said, “we just sold the future thrice in two days.”
Dad called the Bellhop to collect their bags. In the lobby, he handed over the valet ticket and asked the bellhop to retrieve the car and load the luggage while he checked out.
It seemed to be a popular time to check out — a long line snaked toward the desk. I stood off to the side, scanning the lobby.
I didn’t expect the hip‑check.
I looked up.
Lisa.
“We’re checking out,” she said.
I smiled. “Us too.”
I hesitated, then said, “We should be pen pals. That way I can let you know if I ever invent that plush toy.”
Lisa nodded. “You did promise to make one.”
“Yeah,” I said. “I did.”
Both sets of parents arrived at the same moment. The families exchanged polite goodbyes, and Lisa and I waved before the crowd separated us.
Traffic was just as bad as the other day — not a fluke.
“I’m not sure I’d want to live out here and face traffic like this every day,” I said.
“Paradise comes with a price,” Dad replied.
At the airport, the crowds and noise no longer overwhelmed me. I moved through the terminal without needing to watch Dad’s every step, and I liked knowing I could handle it.
Our flight lifted off at one. Eight hours later, Ohio time, we touched down. It was 11:00 p.m. by the time we got home, and I was tired and hungry.
I made a PBJ, drank a glass of milk, and crawled into bed.
The trip was finally over.
Tomorrow, ordinary life would start again, though I doubted it would feel ordinary anymore.
Friday, June 11
The boys woke me up.
Not gently. Not quietly. Just ... woke me up. A thud, a crash, and Eddie’s unmistakable shriek ricocheted down the hallway. Then Mom’s voice cut through the chaos like a whistle.
“Boys! Be quiet and let your brother sleep!”
I blinked at the ceiling, disoriented. My body felt heavy, like I’d slept for a week.
“Mom?” I croaked. “Did I sleep all day Friday and wake up Saturday?”
It sure felt like it.
I dragged myself out of bed, pulled on a pair of shorts, and shuffled into the kitchen in search of food and coffee. Mom was already at the stove, flipping pancakes like she’d been up since dawn.
“Why are you home?” I asked, rubbing my eyes.
She gave me a tired, amused smile — the kind she used when the boys had been especially chaotic.
“I took the day off. The boys made such a mess while you and your father were gone that it’ll take a full day to clean up. With your help, of course.”
I groaned, but she slid a plate of pancakes in front of me, and that softened the blow.
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